Reviews for Eternal
Raedyn-Halliwell07 chapter 1 . 10/10/2005
I think you should've kept the story. It would've been a great piece. People don't understand that if they write best in one way, then they should do it and keep the writings they have, no matter how sucky or horrible they think it is. One should post, or publish it anyway, just to obtain public opinion on it. I personally think that it would be a great piece to read, sickening possibly, but a good piece! _ Keep writing!
Ayumiko chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
It was probably best that you didn't keep it, I think I'd feel the same way, especially since I'd go back to it heaps and keep looking it over.