Reviews for A Tear
alsdjf chapter 1 . 8/18/2005
This was perfect for me to read for the mood I'm currently in -_-. Lovely, too.~Sao
Stephen Haramis chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
I really liked the personification of the tear, great poem and really gives the reader the sense of loneliness
sonata luna chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
Nice rythym, I like the last line... I'd like to request though that in the future you write a summary. If you have no idea what to write for a summary, take a look at summaries of stories that appeal to you and see what you like, then imitate it. Either way, good job for a love poem...
Ruby Woo chapter 1 . 12/25/2004
A clever comparison, and very easy to feel what you're talking about. Well done.