Reviews for Flame
Moroni's Daughter chapter 1 . 9/20/2004
The last line was great. Are you really a Pyro?
Niph speaks chapter 1 . 6/22/2003
I agree...I am EVIL PYRO CHILD! *changes persona and runs around with matches* AHAHAHA! Okay...I forgot. I'm reviewing. So. Great imagery in that poem! Loved it!
Windsong chapter 1 . 6/12/2001
You're a pyro? *inches away* *then something hits her and she runs towards her again* yeah, me too! ;;- Yeah, very nice little poem, but the last line totally breaks the mood that was set by the poem, making it a funny poem instead of a serious, contemplative one. *grin* Keep writing!
nomore65 chapter 1 . 4/29/2001
It's powerful.. the last line destroyes the intensity, though.. kind of a comic relief. I don't know if that's what you were intending or not. Never-the-less, the poem is elegant and fierce: like fire itself. Oh yeah, and being a pyro IS fun! *insert maniacal laughter here*
Cyanide chapter 1 . 4/28/2001
Awesome poem. Really nice. Keep it up.
snookems chapter 1 . 1/17/2001
Oh, it so good that you had to post it twice. :D :) lol
Soccerbabe chapter 1 . 1/16/2001
COOL! Very different from other poems i read! Good Job! Keep writing! :)
Celestial Phoenix chapter 1 . 1/16/2001
Good poem. Putting fire in its own line creates an interesting effect. . .

Long live pyromania! Uh, oh wait. . .um. . .sorry. ;-)