Reviews for Flowers
thatgirl1116 chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
wow, i'm loving the metaphors. especially the flower petal/tear one. oops, it's actually a simile. but whatever it is, it's good.
pleasecometrue chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Amazing :)
Violet Blues chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
So beautiful.
MySweetestSorrow chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Its so real and full of emotion, amazing!
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
that is so awesome!, i really like how you compared the wilting and falling of the petals to the falling tears in your eyes!

*Amber
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
i like it... those metaphors are great... so sad and amazingly true I can definately relate.. I love the beginning
Faithless Juliet chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Mesmerizing detail and imagry, I love it, keep up the good work.

Much love,Juliet.
Camman chapter 1 . 12/26/2004
Oh, it is so good... until I hit 'But I lay covered upon it'. After that it kind of hits a forced feeling, full of Clich├ęs and poetic repetitions. I'm not sure what to suggest for this poem.