Reviews for The beginning of hurt
Dagmar-Macbeth chapter 1 . 8/8/2005
It would be interesting if you ended it:"I love alone"

::shrugs:: I misread it and that's what I thought it had said.

I read a few of your poems, and I would really like to see you write something without a rhyme scheme (though yours really are rather nice; I couldn't rhyme nearly as well to save my life) or perhaps some prose. If you write some but don't feel up to posting it, email me; I'd love to read it (and edit it too, if you wouldn't mind).
liz anya chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
Absolutely remarkable. I love the line "You are like rain to a flower". It makes me melt. So romantic.
Acelyn chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
wow, that was deep. I like the way you wrote that, it leaves a lot for the reaader to imagine, but it gets through with a really good statement. i like that alot!
Aphrael-87 chapter 1 . 12/27/2004
aw, why must u make me need to hug u so much? love it!