Reviews for Visit me
Aero Faerie Extraordinaire chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
I love the imagery. It's really good
JJR Meerraf chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
very romantic, very good. I loved it, and I loved reading new work of yours again! :), I checked the dates... six months since your last update?

Oh well, a great piece of work my friend, very heartfelt, very warm. Excellent work!
H chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
Hey, you're poems are ridiculously you don't want me to read anymore I won't, but you didn't exactly tell me I couldn't search for you ;)

See you soon, honey bee.
in theory chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
I really like this one, I got totally lost in it. Great descriptions too.
myno chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Unusual imagery, you've done away with many of the overused cliches on this subject, and I like that. A couple favorite lines:"The bruised sky watches over" and "Your arms of warm, smooth, solid stone."I like those because the images are awesome, the bruised sky brings to mind the dark purple-ish gray clouds in a midnight blue night sky, and then the thought of arms made of warm stone... Cool poem.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
I really like it. dont delete it! its so beauitful and it could be sexual or not... but its beatifully written... hte perfect example of love ::sighs::
erasedcrap chapter 1 . 12/28/2004
Very good. Definitely sensual. Beautiful poem nicelu and has great subtle rhymes.