Reviews for The Manor
NinjAlt chapter 31 . 5/31/2007
Pretty good story except for Kitty and April not having any powers. That was kind of a let down.
Casey Drake chapter 1 . 9/2/2006
Notice: I am clearing favorite authors because I have far too many to list, so I'm putting everyone on the list on Author Alert, then taking them off favorite authors. This does not mean I do not like you or your stories.

:) CD
FireBringer chapter 22 . 6/15/2006
Fantastic.
The Aud One chapter 31 . 8/20/2005
I found this story one day when i first found out about this website. I read the first chapter and liked it very much. It is now several months later and I'm at the epilogue. I like the story very much and I like your art work also.
Ratt Roses chapter 2 . 6/20/2005
Cool. I like your first , imagining Felix as a guy is so HARD. Then again, I always seem to remember the "previous" versions of these characters as opposed to the written-down hee...-Tara
Ratt Roses chapter 1 . 5/12/2005
Shamshing, Vare, just , it is me, good ol' Tara. I'm not internet stalking you, I've had this account for a ... bedtime now, so I can't read all of it.I like your writing style.
Wolfie Star26 chapter 31 . 4/13/2005
really really good last few chapters. I kinda think you ended it a little two soon, but i still enjoyed it. oyu did a great job. keep up the great work.
devil-blondie chapter 31 . 4/13/2005
Yay! *calms herself*...hehe...my bad.I'm surprised you didn't show the spell reversing things, but hey, it's great the way it ended. On a happy like Felix-Kitty moment (damn Julian) and everyone's happy (even the bad guys). Well, this has been a great story, my fav on FP for sure. Also thanks for taking the time to review my story as , I didn't kill the kid, but I'm not sure yet if Natalia's a goner... I'll think about that when I go to write the sequel. (but that won't be for a long time)Anywho, loved the story lots,NatashaP.S. in true varethane style: Taa!
devil-blondie chapter 30 . 4/10/2005
hehe...the words "you're" "an" "idiot" come to mind...lol jjWow, i didn't actually think you could wrap it up that fast...hmm..the whole Damenses thing might have happened just a little too fast cuz i still don't know what ,great story, my favourite on FP so far (besides mine..lol jj) You have great character developement...though there could have been more loose ends tied up like the whole thing b/t April and Felix, but then again there is the epilogue...Great, cya in the epilogue,TashP.S. speaking of epilogues, i posted the epilogue of ASFW last night (uses psychic powers) must read... it's weird hwo our stories ended at roughly the same time. Meh, buh byesOMG, last note, this is the second time I've tried to review this chapter (fumes) I had to copy the review and paste it in later b/c after like 30 minutes it still hadn't loaded (talk about bad internet..sheesh...
devil-blondie chapter 29 . 4/3/2005
(pauses from kicking computer) what? it's letting me review? Hell must've frozen over...Hey,Wow, only 2 more chapters left (eek...mine only has 1...seems like we've been posting forever, huh?) I can feel it coming to a close, but I am curious to how you're going to do it in only 1 (and an epilogue) more chapters...it feels like there's still 5 or so left..so I can't wait to see what's gonig to happen. I hope felix gets better hehe. (waves pompoms) Go Felix! lol i know i know...Anywho, great couple a chapters, it's getting ,tash(see now i've reviewed both lol...so go review mine..jj)
Wolfie Star26 chapter 29 . 4/3/2005
I knew something was weird with kitty, but does she still have magic or did it leave her when the guardian did? That part is confusing me. other then that, please update soon.
Wolfie Star26 chapter 28 . 3/29/2005
aww, does this story really have to end? It's wicked good. Lol, I sound like alittle kid. You did a great job on this chapter. I wonder what the hell is up with Kitty, I mean everything that she seems to know, but never thought she knew. It's freaky, I hope we find out about her. Please update soon.
devil-blondie chapter 27 . 3/28/2005
Hey,OMG, this story is getting so awesome, all the characters are developing so well, especially Felix, who i absolutely love. The impovement in plot and character since the first chapters is amazing. It's just an all around great story. Please please please don't make Felix transform and attacked them *cries* no! I love Felix...Anywho, sorry it took me a long time to read, but I've been in Ottawa and haven't been on the , cyaTash
Wolfie Star26 chapter 27 . 3/26/2005
umm, this is weird, i'm probably way off base, but are Nadheila and Thrice, like Natasha and Tiara? Cuz they are friends and so are Nadheila and Thrice. It's freaky. Anyway, please update soon.
Wolfie Star26 chapter 24 . 3/19/2005
it's ok, its not like everyone knows what to do when you have a cuncussion. I do, buts the only cuz I've had three.

This chapter was aweosme, the thing with the headmistress dying and the second in command coming to power and chaing everything is good. I think kitty does have magic, but its so deep inside her she can't use it. but that's only my thoughts. please update soon.
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