Excellent poem! Keep up the writing!

I’ll cross my heart and hope to die

If you’ll wipe a tear from off my eye

And make a wish on a lash that fell

Promise me you’re mine till hell-

And every time in between.

This is beautiful but this last bit is the most extraordinary!

that is beautiful..great job :)

awsome. pretty, i love the flow! kow how it feels, said really well! keep it up! * x