| Reviews for Perdition |
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   A Beautiful Nightmare chapter 1 . 6/5/2006 Ooh. I like it. Well done with keeping the syllables. But just one problem: "Down in this cold, dark abyss"... there should be a comma after cold... other than that... great job! |
| eyesofahuntress chapter 1 . 2/9/2006 Short yet full of tension... nice work. Cheers, eyesofahuntress |
| sleepeaze chapter 1 . 3/6/2005 Wow, that was beautiful. *_* |
| Manuel Fajar chapter 1 . 12/30/2004 Life is little things, That we do and feel each day,— Mint gum—Lip gloss—Sun. —m— |
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/29/2004 very powerful and true |
| dcopulsky chapter 1 . 12/29/2004 It sums up a feling well in a short space, but in three lines, it uses two bad cliches (dark abyss, shattered dreams) |