Reviews for Genesis
Mr. Jay Steel chapter 1 . 12/18/2005
Cool story! Keep going.
DarckRedd chapter 1 . 6/26/2005
Interesting, very interesting. Seems to have a bit of a Frankenstein twist to it. You use very little dialogue, which I like. I shall be curious to see what happens next.
Palmer's Obsidian Rose chapter 1 . 6/11/2005
I like it. It has a weird twist to it. It's like in a fairy tale set up. Nice use of conventions here.
Liar Through and Through chapter 1 . 4/19/2005
interesting... intriging, or however you spell it...
hotsauce6548 chapter 1 . 4/10/2005
Wow. Really good so far. You've got me intrigued, now please, continue!
Tessabe chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
This is very interesting, do you intend to post more of the story? I hope you do.
Gothic-Cutie chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
wow, you've done really good so far!
Ayumiko chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
Good job, it's a lot better than my introductions!
Ragade chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Quiet well written for a part one. I liked the way you made the mother religious, but shoulcn't God be with a capital G? Either way, few errors, swift, easy to read, and enjoyable, thus, cudoos, and a thumbs up...
Hannah Rose Williams chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
Good background. Good idea so far. You still need to develop your writing and conventions a little, but... well, don't we all? :)