Reviews for The Death list |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Oh I loved this chapter too... to feel dead eyes open... that so creepy yet fascinating... god I sound like some wacked out shrink... XP... update soon please! Love,Lia |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow interesting first chapter and the prelude was wonderful. I just can't wait until I read Act 2. Later,Lia |
![]() ![]() ![]() it keeps getting freakier i like the way this story is going |
![]() ![]() ![]() talk about freaky, this is the chingon freakiest prolouge ive readthis sounds chingon so farkeep going like this and ill like it |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh! suspenseful...grr. yeah it's been a long time. keep updating! |
![]() ![]() ![]() can't wait to here more! :P~infection~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() -_-;; Great...now I can't send anyone to hell. Regardless of what the situation is, anyone in their right mind who was that mad at another person would sign that paper...scary...Good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww, thanks. I've been meaning to update my story-yours is going well! Update soon, it seems interesting...and it'll be better if there's more to read at once because then people will get more into it :-) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sorry for not finding out that you updated this. Heheh. Anyway, comments! I noticed that this chapter is driven mostly by dialogue, which isn't necessarily a bad thing-in fact, it's more understandable because it's simple. (I hate really long paragraphs full of flowery words... I get confused and lose track of the story) Anyway, I hope the action starts soon, but don't rush it! Heheh. More power to you. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() great work! I can't wait to read more. P. for reviewing my story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() that IS nice twist...update it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Interesting. I like it. Continue writing please. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh nice beginning! it's so interesting and i love the quote at the end. update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Not a bad little story you have here. Kind of has a twilight zone feel to it. I think it might have been given a little more punch if the girl had been given time to think over the "signing", showing that she deserved what happened (for not being forgiving or having second thoughts)-not just because she was tricked. But's that just my thought on the matter. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, interesting concept. I can't wait to see the next chapter, keep writing. :) "Didn't your mother ever teach you not to play games with the devil?" - Nice line. |