Reviews for The Death list
Lia Silverfrond chapter 3 . 9/15/2005
Oh I loved this chapter too... to feel dead eyes open... that so creepy yet fascinating... god I sound like some wacked out shrink... XP... update soon please!

Love,Lia
Lia Silverfrond chapter 2 . 9/15/2005
Wow interesting first chapter and the prelude was wonderful. I just can't wait until I read Act 2.

Later,Lia
Stagg chapter 2 . 6/28/2005
it keeps getting freakier i like the way this story is going
Stagg chapter 1 . 6/27/2005
talk about freaky, this is the chingon freakiest prolouge ive readthis sounds chingon so farkeep going like this and ill like it
Deadly-green-snake chapter 3 . 6/23/2005
oh! suspenseful...grr. yeah it's been a long time. keep updating!
Infection chapter 1 . 4/2/2005
can't wait to here more! :P~infection~
Miss Yukishiro chapter 1 . 2/21/2005
-_-;; Great...now I can't send anyone to hell. Regardless of what the situation is, anyone in their right mind who was that mad at another person would sign that paper...scary...Good job.
ta1nt3d1uv chapter 2 . 1/24/2005
Aww, thanks. I've been meaning to update my story-yours is going well! Update soon, it seems interesting...and it'll be better if there's more to read at once because then people will get more into it :-)
Spare Change chapter 2 . 1/16/2005
Sorry for not finding out that you updated this. Heheh. Anyway, comments! I noticed that this chapter is driven mostly by dialogue, which isn't necessarily a bad thing-in fact, it's more understandable because it's simple. (I hate really long paragraphs full of flowery words... I get confused and lose track of the story) Anyway, I hope the action starts soon, but don't rush it! Heheh. More power to you. :)
C814Gucla chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
great work! I can't wait to read more.

P. for reviewing my story.
Love and Shadow chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
that IS nice twist...update it.
ta1nt3d1uv chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Interesting. I like it. Continue writing please.
Deadly-green-snake chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
oh nice beginning! it's so interesting and i love the quote at the end. update soon!
Willum chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Not a bad little story you have here. Kind of has a twilight zone feel to it.

I think it might have been given a little more punch if the girl had been given time to think over the "signing", showing that she deserved what happened (for not being forgiving or having second thoughts)-not just because she was tricked.

But's that just my thought on the matter.
Spare Change chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Oh, interesting concept. I can't wait to see the next chapter, keep writing. :)

"Didn't your mother ever teach you not to play games with the devil?"

- Nice line.