Reviews for Not Always What They Seem |
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![]() ![]() I'm pretty sure you are already done with the butterfly names, but Navi means butterfly in Korean. Navang is moth for it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I find it really interesting being able to see how far your writing has progressed. I start reading another story, remark upon certain qualities to myself, and can tell how your general abilities improve over the years based on the publishing and update dates. Fascinating. |
![]() ![]() your story really caught me. I've been reading it nonstop now, and i really liked the meaning thing to the names you gave to the characters. By the way, did you know that mariposa is also the portuguese to moth? just something i found interesting. PS: i don't mean to annoy but i saw some phrases missing words around, just be careful, okay? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was/is such an amazing story! It was sad that I got so absorbed into this story I went to click the next chapter and died a little inside when it wasn't there " Its really a great story though... *Will be wondering about it for months XD* |
![]() ![]() It is really a shame that you did not complete this story. It was so awesome and I totally want to know how it ends. I have now read all of NAWTS, Gone With a Bang, and My Toaster. Loved them all. Trying to work up the courage to read Curse. I hope that you come back to this. It is like a fairy tale gone completely wrong. Nothing was as it seemed. |
![]() ![]() I will leave a proper review when I stop crying. But I have to say, there just aren't enough flaming cactus in Nord! |
![]() ![]() um. I hope this is a first-drafty thing. grammar corrections in the first sentence and all that. I'm no aficionado but I still like varied sentence structure. |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay~ Po is finally gonna overthrow Wesp I'm so happy~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() Okay, I'm going to say I'm srry for doing this but I have to let it out before I go crazy - THAT FUCKING BASTARD WESP! I'M GOING TO TEAR HIS WINGS OUT WHILE BURNING THEM AND TAKING HIS MANHOOD DAMNIT! - now that's over you'll be glad to know that I am now addicted to this story |
![]() ![]() ![]() Can i compel you to update? (: It's been such a wonderful story, I'd like to read the end. Unless of course, it's been posted somewhere else. :O |
![]() ![]() ![]() I loved this story. took me 2 days to finish xD;; but I love it. I'm gonna set Wesp on fire and castrate him with a blunt pair of scissors~ |
![]() ![]() ok this is a small detail, but it kinda bugs me that you call prince lucciola like 3 different names. I get confused with names easily. |
![]() ![]() ![]() your one of my fav authors here i love your books i can so relate to most of your characters though im a girl and yo can draw you have so many talents and i hope you do something great with the gifts you have been given though theres no need for hope since i know you will any who keep up the good work old chap |
![]() ![]() Po's S-S-S-STRAIGHT? D: But he's the cutest! ;_; |
![]() ![]() If Po, Far and Vlinder was born the same time why are they different ages? |