Reviews for Loving to see someone dead
zebraffe-x chapter 1 . 6/12/2006
I really liked this poem. And in a way, it kinda reminds me of myself. And I'm not a completely bad person, just so you know. I just had some things that I had to do.

But great job on this one!
EWindheim chapter 1 . 3/4/2005
There is something so eerily wrong with the line 'loving to see someone dead'. A good line though. ~Hawke
AllyCred chapter 1 . 2/7/2005
nice...the flow isnt as good as in the last ones i read and its a little hard to read and understand...but nice, i guess when you dont know how something feels its hard to write about it, well i find it hard neway...but i liked it very well written. lots of love ~AllyCred~
astro-traveling-angel chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Although this pice of your work depicted your lost inside your head, it would seem that you are not because the piece shows that there is more going on and you are thinking about stuff and to me a thinker is sorting out all and in the end it all works out!I like this piece because it makes the reader also think!Keep writing.