|Reviews for Silver|
| Unholy Haven chapter 1 . 6/30/2005
I love your use of colour here. It's like painting emotions with words. It feels smooth, but with a pulse. I like it.
| ambiguityy chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
nice poem - I like your contrasts in the image of the silvery sunlight bathing us in cold warmth. And I get what you mean by you not understanding something you wrote - it happens to me sometimes. I interpreted this as humanity becoming more and more materialistic and ambitious, forgetting their own values - things like friendship and love. But in doing this, they end up destroying themselves instead.
| Dveyoni chapter 1 . 4/11/2005
I ramble too so I know what you mean. i write for no reason too ( wait let me resay that) I don't understaind my writing sometimes. and no compared to some you don't ramble. now, I think that you hate silver. or maybe you just like gold more. or you just though silver was cold. oh I don't know. bye
| Cloud Burst chapter 1 . 4/3/2005
wow this is so lovely! - claps - -adds to favs -
keep these coming!
| Confused-Mind chapter 1 . 2/14/2005
Not exactly sure what it meant either, but the words flowed so beautifully together. Good Job!
| Deavon Brooks chapter 1 . 2/10/2005
hey... I thought I had reviewed this poem, but I just found out I had not. So I'll review. I love the color descriptions: "Scarring us blacker than coal/Silver becomes bluer by the second." Truly awesome. Some poems don't have to make sense to be able to capture an "essence". This poem is one of them: Great job! On my favorite's list.
| LunasLight chapter 1 . 1/24/2005
wow! That was really good! I enjoyed it a lot! *dazed look* super super good! 6!
| Honey Nut Loop and m-j chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
Great poem. I'm mainly reviewing to say HAPPY BIRTHDAY though. I read your bio and it said your Bday was the 23rd of January. And right now it is the 23rd so yeah. Anyway back to the poem. I think it is about the darkness that can manifes twithin anyone thanks to all consuming hate. I see death imagery in the line 'As we all quickly fall below' as hell is below. 'Look up at the silvery sunlight
It bathes us in its cold warmth' I think this line means that we have to let ourselves be healed or no matter the warmth of the help it cannot melt the icy darkness. I see night and day and light and dark symbolism as well standing for the ever present light, so near that it can be taken if only the sufferer tries. Anyway, that is my opinion. Don't know if its any use. i mainly wanted to be the first to say happy birthday. lol. -
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
I loved your wording. I saw the silver aspect of the moon as the surreal nature of violence, degrading our kin, is something I see worldy. I would want to say you are influenced by the wars of the world today. Beautifully done no matter your meaning.
| SleepDontWeep chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
it slightly sounds like ... the end of the will drift into one another and everything will be nothing.. yeh the end of the world,thats just my thought though and my thoughts are usually pretty warped so ...em... i like this!its pure beauty!WELL DONE!love and admiration Gretchen45 xplease review my story 'Truly madly deeply'.tanx xx! itd mean alot!xx
| KonekOniko chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
The poem was beautifully written...the poem does have a meaning, though it's somewhat difficult to put into words. I think it might have to do with the world today, like the war in Iraq. It might be, it might not, but all I can say is, that was a friggin awesome poem! (It's okay to have no clue where the poem came from, happens to me all the time)
Sumi-chan; A whisper in the wind, my love...
| simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
i dont knwo what it means either... I can figure out what the stanzas might mean by themselves but i cant fit them all together, but it is a beautiful poem... with awesome descriptions and sometimes understanding is overrated
| FrostedTeardrop chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
I love the way you wrote this. To be honest I don't really know fully what it means, but it is truly beautiful. An amazing poem. Never stop writing.
| poetic abortion chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
. Wow... _ I love the description.
| xHannahx chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
whatever it means i like it - the idea of gold being warm and silver colder is really cool. i dont think poems always have to have a meaning, as long as they sound good. nicely done,