Reviews for Drunk
theskyatmyfeet chapter 1 . 10/14/2005
This is so...well written. I speaks of all the hopless-ness, the pain of something sad and the though evoking truth of how easy it is to lose sight of something that we love or hold dear.

-kyokokitty*Leaves cream soda and cake*
Wingsy chapter 1 . 3/8/2005
I love this poem. (dont I always? hehe) But anyways, I relate very well(dont I always? universe hiccup) I used to be sucha dreamer. And now i barely even think about it anymore. Only can dream for so long, ne? I have a new addiction, Jrock, poi, and rhythm in general. I swear i shall show you the magic of J-rock *cough cough* J-CRACK *cough cough* ahem. Then we can be addicted together! XD
Wing Chant chapter 1 . 2/17/2005
That certainly took a tale spin on poems related to dreams. I wasn't expecting this! Usually, poems about this topic are heavenly and spiritual. I love your version because it's much different and etiquette compared to the rest. Way to go! ;)
0101010101010101011 chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Er...why? Good use of repetition, and it's short, so it's not annoying, but I'd like to know why you're feeling this way.