Reviews for Stalker
Shorlixa Dragoness-Spirit chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
Hmm, I like the rawness of this poem. There's a certain childishness to the speaker that helps convey the sense of need for the boy and spite for the girl.

Not to nitpick, but it's 'invisible' not invisable. Unless you did that on purpose. It actually helps in the tone of the poem that I pointed out above. An interesting effect.
LonelyPoet chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
It's really interesting. I like how you showed your emotions in it. I know how you feel though, cuz the guy i like, is currently dating the school slut who is just like the "brat" you described. Keep writing. You show some potential talent.
Acelyn chapter 1 . 12/30/2004
wow! thats really well written, very good flow, nice ryhmes, lol but some how very creepy! i love it! :)