This world seems kind of silly with the false fish and the false sewers. If they are not to be too human like and there is a vast punishment for doing human things, this is a strange norm for these folk. Oh well, I guess that is the point.

Joaquotl is a cute little funny birdy fellow. i can quite get a picture of him in my mind's eyes, but that doesn't say much. My head is muddled often. You have some strange turns of phrases in this hapter, but it is interesting.

Ah, Kitty shouldn't feel so bad. After all, I didn't name her. I have the Great Demon Fluffball! And being ferious is not all that it is cracked up to be.

So, I finally got around to reading the other story.

This story seems cute, but a bit weird. And yes, all the good names are taken.

Wow awesome story. It seems really interesting and original. I love the flow. There are occasional times where you are sort of vague about stuff. Like it would be better if you went into detail about the Ice Fey and other humanoids. Put a little bit more descriptions also. Amazing job though.