Thanks for your review. Original ideas coming - just watch out for them. 'Batman' was the major inspiration for the adventure - obviously.

Loved this chapter as well, though I despised the cliffe at the end. You would do that, wouldn't you? *sigh* Guess I'll find out later on. Update soon or I shall be severly angry! Not really, but anyway, please really do update soon, the cliffee was murder and to say I am not having a extreme case of suspense would be a understatement, so please, be nice.

Yes, you continued on with it! Great chapter and I am glad to see that you decided to go forward with this story! The plot thickens and I am curious as to where all this leads...so onto chapter four!

Yes, you continued on with it! Great chapter and I am glad to see that you decided to go forward with this story! The plot thickens and I am curious as to where all this leads...so onto chapter four!

kk...i guess this could be the end. good chapter!

whee...it snowed again! anyways..now that i kno the rebels r good...i hope they win! good chapter! hope the plan will work and that jung will get his revenge : )

im confused...who's good and who's bad? it seems like all the rebels are dying...does that mean they're good or bad? maybe i'll get it wen the next chapters up or something...

Hm...I hope you continue this. This is very interesting, I could see how it can work as a short story, but as something longer, it could truly be great. Please tell me you are going to continue this story.

yes! asian invasion! MUAHAAHAA...asians will rule the world. eh...srry! anyways...good prologue thingy. at the moment it doesnt seem like it would work as a short story but that could just be me. so, put first chapter up soon

~Iceunia