our right, and I'm very sorry...I was just trying to defend her...I was just angry...I should have waited until I calmed down...anger makes you do things you dont mean...and your right...I jusdged your story without reading it...and I probably never will...you have my most sincere appolaogies..and I think your story would be really good...maybe when I'm older I'll understand a little more...really...I'm not mad anymore...and as soon as i pressed the 'sumit review' button, i felt horrible!

*snort* ya no, yapi is gay, and so ARE YOU! HOW DARE YOU FLAME MY FRIEND! BEFORE YOU FLAME SOMEONE, YOU SHOULD LOOK AT YOUR OWN STORY AND SEE WHAT IT'S LIKE BEFORE YOU DISS SOMEONES THAT IS BETTER THAN YOURS! really, do you think she knew that her story was exactly like that manga? How dare you say that her story sucks, when yours isnt all that great either...i no mine isnt, but I dont go around FLAMING people for no reason! You dont have to hurt my friends (Kai-lovergrl)feelings! have a little compassion, please!

o_o never would I have ever thought that I would flock to a story like a mindless drone like I have to this one -_-v I must say that I usually get bored with story's more often than I would like being that most stories don't have the depth this one does P I’m glad to see that I have finally found a great story to read (just don’t make the ending suck and I’ll be happy)

Much Love Never B

Wow, this is very interesting. I can hardly wait to see what happens next. keep it up.

I am very interested in this fic, because I know very little about the pron industry, let alone the gay porn industry. Please, do continue! Aiden seems like a confused sweetheart on the wrong path.

Hiya, i saw your review on my story called 'disguised' and i just wanted to say a few things.

You say my story is like this one other manga that I have NEVER heard about. If you don't really like my story, it's okay becuase people have different interest traits, but please don't bother telling me you don't like it and i'm copying something.

And if you really don't like my story, you don't have to read it.

I appreciate your review though.

Wow, now *that* is morbid humor. I'm still chuckling a bit from the prologue here, thinking I'll continue onwards, deeper into this story.

By the way, thank you for your kind words on my story. Such a detailed review does require a due kindness done unto the reviewer.

I hope to please you further, and no, the story doesn't read as such. I'm still revising this mind you, going to publish it perhaps this year.

Who knows? I've been writing on this thing for over five years now, another year wouldn't hurt, but I would like to keep my promise to entertain those who began reading it five years ago and still are not yet satisfied in their reading of it. ;)

Anyway, continuing onwards. There's not much here that needs a lot of work, it all works and I gave it a casual and in-depth read. You can read this casually and *still* get the point of this prologue; nicely done. You've got my interest at least, if that counts for much.

-James C. Woodall,Author and Creator of the World of Serzahnk series. (C) 1998-2005.

I'm sad that the chapters aren't longer but hey quality is better than quantity P any ways just a few things I picked on, one or two grammer and spelling errors -_-v other than that update ASAP

Much Love Mo D

I truly loved the discription, something that some stories lack, although I have only read the prolouge I think I will enjoy this story

Much Love Mo D