I can't wait for them to get together.

Okay So I think a song that would be perfect for this would be "Dear John" by Taylor Swift. I was listening to it and in the first verse is says "I lived in your chess game but you changed the rules every day." So I kept listening and if King and Pawn ever got together it would so be their song.

I love it! && Render. I want him.

Please be Render!

I love em. Love em love em love em!

I miss Render. Sadface.

I'm really hoping that's Jessie with the light and not her parents or Anna's brother or something.

My favorite chapter yet.

Poor Anna.

Yeah this is going to go well.

I am so proud of her.

I just know I am going to fall head-over-super-spiky-heels for this story.

you are amazing! i really don't know if goths act this way but you wrote a fiction about them that i absolutely loved!

Wonderful story. I really like stories with goths/punks/emos etc, because when I first started to read romantic stories it was always the nerd and the jock, or the prep and the looser or something. Then I found these kinds of stories, and I like it, A LOT. Thank you for writing.

Cheers.

Okay I stayed up till 6:30 am reading through this entire story because I could not tear myself away after chapter 2. I read it all in one night and I absolutely adore it. You are an amazing writer with such creativity that I felt I had to tell you as much. I plan to look into your other stories as well. I do admit there are some places that were a little scratchy but overall I think it's great. Though sadness to Diablo, he seemed like an interesting guy.