|Reviews for My Wish|
| vballgurl154 chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
I'm trying to find my favs of ur poems- i havent read 2 many but i like this one...
| lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Very descriptive. The situation really gets through to the reader. flows well too. good work on this!
| dancingintherain chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
this is really nice!
stanzas? u can help me? ok, sure! just email me :)thank you!
| Poetrybay chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
you are truley a writer who writes from there emotions, emotions are sometimes tthe key to writing. my writing teacher once told me that I write from the heart and that emotions can be the key to your writing poems. I'm glad I took her advice and you should take mines
| Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
absolutely beautiful and the ending was perfect! *high fives*
| catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
just WOW! this says so much on so many levels
| ApplesCM chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
Nice poems! :)
| Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
thats great! all 3 of them!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
i like the longest verson best! lol they r all good tho!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
aww. this is just as sweet as the 3rd, but im a romantic person so i like the 3rd best :) this one is good 2!
| hiding behind amber eyes chapter 3 . 1/2/2005
aw! this is so sweet! i like this a lot! keep it up!
| born-again chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
All three of them are amazing but I think I like the second the most. I found the first didnt say enough, the third told a little too much with the last stanza but the secnd was just right. Having said that,I thought all three together worked really really well read in sequence. Good write!
| angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 3 . 1/2/2005
this was also very nice n sweet I liked them all
| angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
this was nice very good I like this one better then the first one you are an amazing writer
| angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
wow that was nice very sweet good job