Reviews for My Wish
vballgurl154 chapter 1 . 10/9/2005
I'm trying to find my favs of ur poems- i havent read 2 many but i like this one...
lifescrewsusall chapter 1 . 1/26/2005
Very descriptive. The situation really gets through to the reader. flows well too. good work on this!
dancingintherain chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
this is really nice!

stanzas? u can help me? ok, sure! just email me :)thank you!

~hellokittyhchi31~
Poetrybay chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
you are truley a writer who writes from there emotions, emotions are sometimes tthe key to writing. my writing teacher once told me that I write from the heart and that emotions can be the key to your writing poems. I'm glad I took her advice and you should take mines
Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
absolutely beautiful and the ending was perfect! *high fives*
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
just WOW! this says so much on so many levels
ApplesCM chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
Nice poems! :)
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 3 . 1/3/2005
thats great! all 3 of them!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
i like the longest verson best! lol they r all good tho!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
aww. this is just as sweet as the 3rd, but im a romantic person so i like the 3rd best :) this one is good 2!
hiding behind amber eyes chapter 3 . 1/2/2005
aw! this is so sweet! i like this a lot! keep it up!
born-again chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
All three of them are amazing but I think I like the second the most. I found the first didnt say enough, the third told a little too much with the last stanza but the secnd was just right. Having said that,I thought all three together worked really really well read in sequence. Good write!
angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 3 . 1/2/2005
this was also very nice n sweet I liked them all
angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 2 . 1/2/2005
this was nice very good I like this one better then the first one you are an amazing writer
angel of sorrow n darkness chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
wow that was nice very sweet good job
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