Reviews for Not Broken
marinawings chapter 1 . 1/11/2005
that was beautiful. i really, really liked it. and no, i haven't disappeared from the face of the earth. i will soon be updating my stories.
Dying Without Gackt chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Ah - very nice. It flowed perfectly and just gave out a nice feeling. Nice words and with the snow falling and all - nice touch. I updated "Behind Kaiti Yotsu" so please check it out - I'll be reading more of your story soon.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
beautiful imagery and lovely metaphors.. awesome poem
Amora Elvenstar chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Really good job. I like how you phrased some of the sentences. There was a little bit of rhyming, which i liked and the overall thought this was written in was interesting.
scudcrow chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
"To regain all these feelings...They’re now just washing over me...When the leaves will swirl down...That yearning, wistful longing"-quite beautifully written with vivid imagery. Rain brings in so many wistful colors to everything!
invalid id chapter 1 . 1/1/2005
I signed on to review, that should be proof this is good :P. Lol, really, this is really good. I like the rain . . . this is vvery good on decription and imagery, you did a great job.

(PS I actually posted 2 things recently, please R and R :D)