Reviews for My Behest
continuous brevity chapter 23 . 6/20/2007
update? that would be lovely.

awesome chapter :]
shelimar chapter 23 . 6/16/2007
are you kidding me? seriously, is this a joke? why is he kissing rayne? he has christian for gods sake! is he nuts? i i can't believe this. i would continue my ranting but this is not big or long enough.

is this gonna be updated?
merrymowmow chapter 23 . 4/1/2007
I was wondering when you're going to update?
afk chapter 23 . 2/3/2007
how hot! hahaha! Very nice chapter and a good twist!
Prisoner-11 chapter 23 . 2/2/2007
He MUST of fallen asleep and he MUST be dreaming. :D Not that I mind by the way.
usonaki chapter 23 . 2/2/2007
well it depends how easy the problem is to resolve.

If you'll have to do a lot of thinking to figure out how to solve it, then post it later, after you've figured out how to resolve the issue. If you alreayd know how you will, but just haven't yet, then post it now.

I hope that helps? Well, however long it takes, it's defintiely worth the wait. XD
JadedinNowhere chapter 23 . 2/1/2007
dudde, just post the new chapter! xD
xanthofile chapter 22 . 12/12/2006
i just got embarassed with Ward. that was horrifying. *hides face* this is why i have to leave the room during most comedy movies, because i can't stand to watch someone commit social suicide or something as drasticly stupid as all that.

merrymowmow chapter 22 . 12/9/2006
I was wondering when you're going to update.
Rachel chapter 22 . 10/22/2006
OH I loved this chapter! I really thought Rayne knew about the action! What a joke...I never saw it coming. I thought it was funny once I got the double meaning. nice job on that!

I loved the end too. I've had that happen to me before, and it does actually happen. Some people think it wouldn't, but it's possible.

I still can't say for sure who I want Ward to be with. I wonder if Rayne really likes Ward, or what right now. I can't wait to read more and find out how everything changes. I still like Christian, though he can be scary and intiminating.

Wonderful chapter, update soon!
Rice-Ball247 chapter 22 . 10/21/2006
lolz i love this chapter too... mm... boy on boy smex in the other chapter, n i luff Rayne, Chris and Ward's characters, they're so smexi! n cute, yeah? lolz i don't make sense n e more, it's so weirrd...i think i got a high on orange juice :D lol, a note about the last chapter: My little yaoi fangirl in my brain was screaming in frustration when reading this story. Ward has Christian, the ever so fucking sexy boyfriend, his best friend is fucking HOTT n cares about him and shit (n i wanna cry coz i want a friend like him...) n RAYNE PHELPS! OMFG lolz the line: Rayne giggled nervously and peeked up at me beneath thick lashes. "Oops, sorry." - he doesn't sound sorry at all... I LOVE IT! LOLZ makes Rayne sound like he realli lykz edward! :D i mean, gypsy eyes :P *faves* please update son! or i'll cry.. :'( *pouts*
Blinding Twilight chapter 1 . 10/20/2006
hey, I've been a huge fan of this story, I love it! *girly giggle* haha. I really like the story line and everything but I can't help but feel that colin should have taken his virginity. I really think that colin and ward would make a better couple then christian anyday. I personlly don't like christian at all, I hate his type. I would really like to see ward with rayne but give colin a chance too k? lol
Peach Mouse chapter 22 . 10/20/2006
Hm... Don't feel like logging in...

But, twas a good chapter!... Maybe Ward can be with Rayne... Oh. Sorry. I guess I'm not making the decisions around here. *blinkblink*

Ahaha, I STILL don't like Christian. It's also kind of weird 'cause I KNOW a guy named Christian. Yeah. But, he's nothing like this one. I also know a Colin, but he's just my friend's older brother. So no worries about that name. I don't know a Rayne. I wish I did. But I don't.

Erm. Well. Update soon.

*pounces on Ward*
afk chapter 22 . 10/20/2006
YAY CHAPTER! And hey dion't sweat it by uodating late, really if you see how much i take to update. you could wit three lifetimes lol XD nice chaopter and gawd i would die bieng ward! how embarassing!
Flying Ninja of the Midmorning chapter 21 . 10/7/2006
*blinkblink* I don't like Christian. At all. I like Collin. So Ward should end up with him. 3

Ah well, good story anyway.
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