Reviews for My Behest
merrymowmow chapter 21 . 10/4/2006
I was wondering when you're going to update ' My Behest'
saii chapter 21 . 9/6/2006
It's been a while since I read this story. Very happy you updated. Christian is confusing, he seems to care about Ward, to the point of obsession, but then goes and does something stupid. Perhaps he is just afraid of his feelings and making a commitment. Keep going, I'm waiting impatiently for next chapter.
StolenSoul4818 chapter 21 . 9/4/2006
Well it's been awhile since I read this little story. Computer wouldn't start, reformatted it and it worked but without all my crap. So anyways, on to the review. Wonderful as usual. This review goes from the chapter I stopped reading at till now. I realize, once more, why fiction press owns my heart. So many amazing stories, this one included. I really love how you write. I think it gives a very blunt, sincere view. I'll give you that it sounds young, but it gives it it's own sort of edge and will improve with nothing more than age and experience. That is really the only flaw I see and it's not really a flaw. It's just age. Nothing wrong there. But it's fantastic. Your character's are all different, which is fantastic. Usually in stories the characters all sort of sound the same to some degree. I haven't really found that here. Your character developement is good, needs improving but that will come with nothing but much more writing, which is lucky for me if you keep posting it on here. All in all, your writing is fantastic and I really have enjoyed this story. I honestly really have and I hope you continue to update more, finish this story, then proceed to write more stories. Good luck and best wishes.
Rachel chapter 21 . 9/3/2006
I am lovin' it up. I like Christian, and sadly, I hope he stays with him. Christian needs good lovin'. But I want a threesome too. LOL.

Update soon, great chappie!
Pivoine chapter 21 . 9/1/2006
it was a real pleasure to see a new chapter coming. I miss your story but I know you'll be always here to update it, even if you're quite busy lately...hehe...well I think so. and oh yes, I love Kara, I love that dynamic girl ! Finally this day is not such a bad day...oh please baby!(I talk like Colin!)update soon if it's possible!
afk chapter 21 . 9/1/2006
yay update! and i really wouldn't talk to christian..wekll i don't know hahahaha poor ward
MartinaMONK1 chapter 20 . 8/31/2006
OMFG! Can't believe you snuck this update passed me. You have got to get Ward away from that raving lunatic. At first I thought he had some redeeming qualities, but ick! You write melodrama like nobodies business. And Ward is so gay. Sweat pea shower gel? LOL. And Colin might as well turn in his straight card. Babe? Baby? Sitting outside while your gay best friend is being de-virginized? The boy needs to take a ride on the clue bus. Hope you continue to update, and sorry about the mono.
Kitsune Luver chapter 20 . 8/17/2006
Poor Edward! He deserves better. Christian really makes me mad. He just up and left Ward after he gave the man his virginity! Evil bastard! Plus he had complete disregard for Ward's safety and didn't use a condom. Colin needs to just get over his heterosexual ways and admit that he likes Eddy. I mean, come on, everyone already knows that he is in love with the little tyke! Oh, and by the way, I'm getting really confused w/ the whole Edward/Sean thing. More than once have you called him Sean, and this confuseles me. So maybe address this, idk. Anyway, I could have missed something and this could be on purpose, but whatever. And please update soon b/c I luv this story and can't wait for the next chapter! Ok, thanks, luv ya!
Prisoner-11 chapter 19 . 6/16/2006
Did you change Ward's name to Sean?
Marie chapter 19 . 5/14/2006
Ah, how unresponsible. But it's good that Ed took it so seriously. Safe Sex Forever!
Pivoine chapter 19 . 4/10/2006
bad christian bad christian! I hope Ward won't get STD...or be...pregnant (hehe it'll be difficult - impossible -that's better- given his gender) anyway that was a very hot chapter! and I definitely appreciate the words "warning"...sweet warning...sweet warning...yummy!so update? mh?
Pivoine chapter 18 . 4/10/2006
Hilarious! the neighbors must have wondered what was happening in my apartment...well it's not everyday you can hear hysterical laughter...bleh
Pivoine chapter 17 . 4/10/2006
OMG it was time I review I suppose! and yeah you can kill me for being so late...hem...I feel bad...and really guilty! so I'm catching up! and I need a break from work and from an evil headache! this chapter was like a good medecine! I feel better now! and my perverted mind will fully appreciate some CollinxWard action... perhaps I'm imagining things which are not here...hehe
TricksterGoddess chapter 19 . 4/6/2006
First off I like the name of this chapter 'Milkshake'.. For some odd reason it fits this chapter perfectly.. and OMG was this lemon 'lip smacking good'_~ You friggin rock! Um yea... I think that was a pretty big 'oops' there with not using a condom, hopefully he won't contract any diseases, and hopefully this was the first time Christian didn't use a condom so therefore he shouldn't be in too much danger. Please update soon and keep up the good work_!
afk chapter 19 . 4/6/2006
O_o shees girl this was HAWT! and oh no condoms, bady baday boy... don't make ward get aids or something -_- please?
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