Reviews for My Behest
unknwnfuture chapter 19 . 4/6/2006
Hey great chapter. I had my playlist going on iTunes and the whole 'warning' section had A Message by Coldplay playing and it fit perfectly, lol. I would imagine the only thing Sean would have to worry about is if Christian has some sort of disease which I think would be highly unlikely right? Keep up the good work, can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Wynter Ravenheart chapter 19 . 4/6/2006
now THAT'S a nice thing to come home to home, turning on the pc, reading a fic with a beautifully displayed sex scene...

Tho I thing this part of the story should be on rathen than ; with no condom? uh bad boy christian is! really bad! *hit him with her paperfan*and you know what? FUCK the there ANY chance that I might get a 4some in this?

all in all the scene killed me
xanthofile chapter 19 . 4/6/2006
lol he forgot the condoms. oopsies.

ah, this was great. i loved the bit about moving an inch before he said so and his balls were coming off. *cracks up remembering* i could see and hear that line, it was the best.

no falling down on the job, dearie., i won't rip ya a new one. for now. FINALLY, SEX.
Limited Edition chapter 19 . 4/6/2006
Milkshake? Girl...YOU PERV! I love you hahahahahaThe last sentence made me crack. And I who managed not to laugh through the whole chapter! (But I was damn close). What can I say? Good as always!
Marie chapter 3 . 3/27/2006
Hi, great beginning.

I think in "Christian was silent", you meant to say "Colin was silent". Third paragraph from the end. Sorry, I'm a stickler for accuracy. Bane of my life. So feel free to ignore. Goes off to read more.
Wynter Ravenheart chapter 18 . 3/19/2006
I LOVED!they're so cute but...

can i expect a 3some or that's just wishfull thinking?
Limited Edition chapter 18 . 3/19/2006
Seriously, I can't find any more mistakes in this chapters than in the previous ones, just what exactly does your beta do o.O The most repeating mistakes I find is punctuation mistakes and the fact that you mix up "breathe" and "breath" rather often.I'm kinda spazzing right now XD (Yeah, I'm rather much like Kara)I envy how the words just flow ek
Limited Edition chapter 14 . 3/19/2006
Dude, my stomach hurts from all the laughing ek
Limited Edition chapter 6 . 3/18/2006
Wahay! Found ya on FP XD I like this story a lot. I just can't stop reading and it's your fault! Bad bad girl! The party kinda sounds like the parties in my school...What an evil cliffhanger!
unknwnfuture chapter 18 . 3/9/2006
Ooh that chapter was so good! It was so funny at parts it made me laugh out loud. I can't wait for your next one! ~matt
TricksterGoddess chapter 18 . 3/8/2006
OMFG This is so freakin awesome! I was starting to get a little bored reading all the slash on AFF because there really isn't any romance in the stories, so I'm REALLY appreciating this fic. Please update soon and keep up the good work_!P.S. I hope to read a lemon soon_~
xanthofile chapter 18 . 3/8/2006
god, this chapter seriously made me laugh out loud. and i was wondering how long AFFnet might be down. *pouts*

it was a bit hard to read at some parts, but over all, not too shabby for being un-beta'd.

i really did laugh. that was great. the mental imagery was perfect.
afk chapter 18 . 3/8/2006
OMG! *_* i'm so glad you updated! write more lol! and yes there are a few mistakes but *shrug* i do the same with my stories you can beta it later, they are minor!
Cherise chapter 17 . 1/28/2006
Oh my gosh! I seriously can't believe him! He called best friend council and ends it with..."Yes! I'm getting nookie!" Hahahaha! That was hilarious! And he is so funny because he's so horny!
Jayn chapter 17 . 1/27/2006
Heh heh heh. I think i've said and or thought this a thousand times: WARD IS SO CUTE! Lol. PLEASE update!
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