I needa use you as an example and get my own ball rolling. I needa update! Anyways though, great chapter. I loved it. Not alot of Montana and Piza (-pout- please tell me they aren't out of the story!) but still really good. Actually now I'm seriously curious as to see if Moria is pregnant. That would be great, to have him pregnant with Brad's child in prison. Imagine how tha would be... aww... so cute -pets pregnant Moria- so kawaii! -gets bitten- OW!

Wow, men having babies! Cool chapter, I hope you will put up what the general said in this chapter. Keep up the wicked work!

BYEBYE

yum

"I never knew that sex could be used as a torture device."

"Me either." Taylor said falling quiet

HE'S LYING!

Also:I love you, I love you, I love you, I love you! Marry me?

I can officially say that this is my personal FAVORITE story. I love everything about it. I love the way you write and I feel so bad for Moria...even though I know I should be feeling that wat for Bradly. -gags a bit at the heteroness- but other than that! MORIA MORIA MORIA!

I've been waiting ages for this update! lol, i was actually kina jazzed when i got the email too, i think it made my morning . (yeah i know, i need a life) look forward to your next update,[Kai]

To say the least, FINALLY! and bradly can't just forget about General Moria!Update ASAP so I get to know what happens!

Mars

PLEASE UPDATE! Ilove this story anf the firey-just-below-the-surface-passion that Moria and Bradley feel for one another. -offers a robotic Adir plushie-

PLEASE UPDATE! I love this story so much! -sighs- Seriously I do. I hope things get better with Moria and Bradley-and stupid-head Bradley realizes that he does want Moria still and stuff. -SNIFFLES- Pwease update...I beg of you. -slips you a chocolate covered Sariphan-

I adore this story (and Moria) to pieces. Montana and Piza are slowly slipping into my favorite couple spot though. SO. I hope you update this soon. I look forward to it.

M-hey! New reader, and one who very much liked your story. Moria's my fav. character. I don't know why seeings how he's sorta a sick one. The plot's an origional one that contains slash, and is actually very well put together.

And the assassin is a redhead! *grins* Sorry, just had to put that in there.

My god, you two are... amazing. If I hadn't already known, I could have never guessed that there was more than one author writing this chapter. You two flow so neatly and stuff (all out of good, big words cuz he's stunned like that).

I don't think this is going to be too long because I'm all tired and stuff. (Am I always tired while reading? I think reading makes me tired.) But still, I just love it.

And damnit, Jay, you ARE so... so... God damn, boy! I'm speechless to even attempt describing how effing awesome you are.

(I'd tell Heather too, but I'm afraid that sinse I've already told her in virtually every review, it'll get old... LoL. Oh, what the hell. Heather, you're my hero...er...heroine [and not the drug -] and Jay just rocks my world like that so yeah)

So now that I'm DONE making myself sound rather like an idiot with my incoherent babbling... I'm going to go curl up in a ball and sleep some more.

adieu

Like the story, see you in an update!

This is getting confusing by the minute. Moria's getting back what he deserves...sort of...UPDATE!

omg! BRAVO BRAVO! BLODY BRILIANT~~! goodjob!