Reviews for This War of Ours
Skeet chapter 7 . 4/12/2005
Yay I really liked this chapter! I'm glad no one I liked died. Moria is getting on my nerves though. Bradley needs to show him whose boss! And the violet-eyed boy interests me...Please update soon!
Mars Demo chapter 7 . 4/12/2005
OMG Montana and Piza are such a good cuple * I do hope Bradly and Moria get back together *they were a good cuple too XD

until next timeMars D'mo

p.s.- update aspa
d'Neronique chapter 7 . 4/12/2005
I adore this story on multiple levels. I especially loved drugged Moria. I love anything Moria. Woot. Just a few noes of amusement:

"This one…interests…me..."Yes, I'm sure he does.

"...No two-bit boy looking like a slut-" You HAD to put that in there. God!
Jinny chapter 6 . 3/27/2005
Moria's and Bradley's men should team up and beat the evil guy to death. O.o;;

This story doesn't look as if it's headed for happy endings. But it's still such a wonderful story and I'm so glad that I actually made myself have time to sit down and read it. I'd be missing out on a lot if I hadn't

Though I must ay that sitting still for three hours has not been easy. Especially on Easter with candy and hyperness... tends not to work out in my favor.

Even so, I love your characters and the story line. It's classic and tragic. And you can see both sides of the story, so neither Moria nor Bradley can be made out to be evil at this point. Torture is essential in the obtianment of information at points in war. Obeying the orders to do so is imperative.

And even so, all in all, Moria is a very dignified character. Through his lust and crazy child-like demeanor, he remains a lovable character. Or maybe I'm just crazy and love sadistic bad-boy ukes. Who knows?

I really do like Antonio Piza and Rivers... they are a nice couple. Plus I just love the name Antonio, because the shortened version, Tonio, is so cute. And Montana being so protective of little Tonio (I made my own nickname for him. Wow, I really do like him!) is absolutely precious. The two of them together seem to ease the pain and worry, if only a little. To have each other when they die will hopefuly prove to be a comfort. I really couldn't say. At least someone to hold on to.

The story line is in an amazing direction. I'm always so impressed with how you pull of your stories. I want to say that you write them and elaborate on the plot as you go. If you do, be happy to know that you are one of few I have seen to do that effictively and correctly.

And how the characters interact after a while, how the opposing sides get used to each other, is pretty true in real life. The angst and the action, all possible. Now, I'm not too sure about battling it out over a disk with another planet, but this IS a fantasy story, right? *smiles*

I'm starting to think that Moria's lust for Bradley has grown into something more; and Bradley's hatred and lust for Moria has grown into true caring. They act like a married couple at times, just much, much more violent, by all means.

I think I'm going to fall over now. My brain is dead from all this reading and writing. I just want to go to bed now. _;; Sad, ne?

Love you hun


PS I talked to Jade! But he's acting funny...
Jinny chapter 3 . 3/27/2005
Well, shit. And I was just beginning to like Moria, too. He's pretty cute, and you just *know* there's a good side to him. And I wanna move on now cuz I wanna read the rest!
Namishka chapter 6 . 3/27/2005
just what is happening? quite a turn of events...n when are you updating CRDP...i'll wait..
jma chapter 6 . 3/20/2005
This story is *in awesome! I dig it hard-please update mad soon!
Mars Demo chapter 6 . 3/20/2005
TT_TT you have to update quick lol, it's so sad, I don't want them to die TT_TT, update ASAP

Much Love Mars D'mo
Mars Demo chapter 2 . 3/20/2005
TT_TT wahhahaha, I hate to admit it but I cried lol, anyways I like this story, so I'm continuing, sorry to leave you with a short review XD

Much Love Mars D'mo
Sheepie chapter 6 . 3/19/2005
Wow... . OMG! YOU ARE NOT KILLING THEM! WAAH! -cries- POOHEAD! I liked the chapter though, the beginning was very hot. Lol.

The little Montana Piza scene was kinda sad. Brought tears to my eyes! Poor Moria!

Skeet chapter 6 . 3/19/2005
I hope no one good dies! I don't want to the general to die either! Maybe him and Bradley can go someplace where they will never be the disc really destroyed?
J.D. California chapter 6 . 3/19/2005
Nate T chapter 6 . 3/18/2005
You've left me so restless. Really. Beacuse I hate thinking that poor Moria, the adorably sadistic bitch he is can no longer be unrelentlessly fucked by Bradley, the manHunk he is. This is sad.
Smile101 chapter 6 . 3/18/2005
WHAT! You're not going to kill them. Are you? PLEASE DON'T! I love all your stories, by the way. _ I've read all your stories and am reading them. :D
M L chapter 5 . 3/15/2005
hehe, Torii is actually kind of hilarious -grin-

I was going to mention, in the first or second chapter Bradley is tied to a table and then you refer to it as a bed. o.O

And then you have lots of things like "I will have these men excited"(lol, sorry) that a spell check won't notice, but is wrong anyways.
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