|Reviews for This War of Ours|
| M L chapter 4 . 3/15/2005
the thing in the bag was.. creepy o.O
Piza and Montana still adorable.
| M L chapter 3 . 3/15/2005
"You have a very nice ass, too." lol.
The box? I don't get it. Anyway, some things were confusing, you should describe the setting more for this place.
I like their language, it's fun -grin-
| M L chapter 2 . 3/15/2005
It reminds me of some romance book I read. Well.. I didn't finish.
Montana and Piza are adorable, they seem to be the only ones passive in the situation.
Please tell me Moria isn't falling for Bradley..? argh.
I had some critique but I don't remember what it was.. I was going to say that you should clarify who's speaking at the beginning of the conversations to make things simpler. It gets confusing sometimes.
I like Moria, but he's not allowed to go all soft on us! AH! Now I like Montana and Piza. -smile-
| M L chapter 1 . 3/15/2005
lol, I saw your translations in your blog and it made me laugh so.. here I am.
I really like it. You can be more descriptive like with physical descriptions and setting. such as the cage, what does it look like, and the men.
I love your character Moria. I wouldn't want to have anything to do with him in real life, but he is a sick bastard and every story needs one. -grin-
| Namishka chapter 5 . 3/15/2005
Moria's seems to be nicer right now...
| Cyn chapter 5 . 3/12/2005
I was happy to see this story lived up and even went beyond my expectations. Hot, steamy and full of intrigue.
| J.D. California chapter 5 . 3/12/2005
nice very nice
| Sheepie chapter 5 . 3/11/2005
Omg...-twitches- I loved it. More Montana and Piza!
Loved it though, very good. XD I love this story. It's addicting. I can't wait to see what happens.
Poor Moria. -huggles him- .
Is Matthews going to cause problems? XD That be kewl. More conflict! More angsts! More drama! w00t!
Anywho, loved this chapter. Update soon! Great job!
| d'Neronique chapter 5 . 3/11/2005
That was hot. Moria finally got his pseudo-hug. But I was pleased. And wow, did Moria get pounded! That poor thing! With ten inches, that's got to be mad painful! And he was bleeding? That's going to take FOREVER to heal! I think Moria needs a less aggressively fucktastic hug.
And now I'm curious about the disk. A lot. But don't tell me. Just write. Just write. That's all I ask for. A fuck and quick writing.
| Noelle chapter 4 . 3/9/2005
I hope Moria finds Bradley getting comfy [take note: WILLINGLY) with the a pretty soldier. XD
| Namishka chapter 4 . 3/6/2005
| Kaikeyi chapter 4 . 3/6/2005
jeez how long has it been since i reviewed? eep! well i guess this one will have to make up for all the others i missed. . i have to tell you i'm now addicted to this fic, i have no idea why but it's just really really good and the tension between the characters is fascinating. and btw, who actualy has the disk? _[Kai]
| J.D. California chapter 4 . 3/4/2005
nice nice nice
| Sheepie chapter 4 . 3/3/2005
GAH! I loved it, specially all the Montana and Piza scenes. Kill Johnny boy. Touch Piza and annoy poor Brad. I felt bad for Moria still, poor guy. Anywho, will the new guys cause problems like Johnny boy there or will they be of some help? . Wonder what they will say about Montana and Piza if anyone finds out. Anywho, loved it. Update soon!
| Skeet chapter 4 . 3/3/2005
God Moria is such a sadistic bastard. I'm sure he regrets hurting Bradley that bad but he was twisting the knife around for crying out loud! He definitly has issues. Bradley shouldn't even try to make him angry...he should just ignore him since that is what would probably hurt him the most. Or maybe one of the new soldiers can take an interest in Bradley and he can use that to piss Moria off. Please update soon!