Great chapter suga, I really loved it. XD Moria is ebil. I felt bad for him though, Bradley made a low blow with his last comment.

I want more Piza and Rivers though! . They are cu~ute! . Specially Piza. Lol. Anywho, great job.

O! Pls update again soon! I wanna see what happens to Moria!

That was freaking awesome. I really, really want a Moria plushie. Torii kicks ass, too. I don't like the new humans. More characters confusion.

But that's alright. So excuse me if my words reflect defectively. I'm slightly awed with it all.

I love Moria! He fucking rocks! -does the snoopy dance- I can't wait for more! PLEASE! BY ALL THAT IS POWERFUL-UPDATE!

I liked that Moria was getin a lil nice but that could just b that i'm looking forward to our dear Bradley torturing him, which coul part. enoyed that last fight...I think I need help. Oh well...I want more! so update soon.

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Bradely seems tough...so I hope that he can deal with whatever Moria had up his sleeve. After all he has to protect the disc for his men. Please update soon!

My my my...more seme torture! ::smiles:: And...Can I have Torii? I like him! ::giggles and hugs:: Another wonderful one! YAY!

There's something about Moria that makes one want to eat him. I don't know. And I'm curious about this 'box.' It sounds ravishingly horrifying.

So I was thinking. If Moria and Torii were to, by some odd occurance beyond comprehension, have a child, its name should be 'Toria.'

"You’re a child." Bradley said unable to stay ‘that I’m screwing.’

Damnit! I have that problem, too!

when's the next update?

nice chapter very nice -bows- more soon luv

btw i luv the piza X montanathey are soo ka-ute!

oh i see how this internet is...it'll let me reivew you but not mary. lol.

um...so amazingly... moria isn't really a bad guy...just a bit sadistic, ne? *cringes*

i don't understand why he would complete a ritual to make bradely his lover...even in war...that's really strange.

but strange chars are more fun anyway, right? besides...i love this story and i can't wait for mores!

poor piza...he's my favorite so far cuz he's so cute sounding. i wanna hug him to death (not really)

i can't believe that guard actually killed poor lil johnny! (johansson...or however you spell that) ... but i guess it would be unrealistic to not have casulatites in war! damn those realists! damn them all to hell!

anyway...lol...i'm glad i caught the update to this...its an awesome (kinda scary) story. i've waited for this one for a while! gr ... lol.

can't wait for more...sorry that this isn't really coherent! im just in one of those can't-string-two-words-together moods so yeah...

love you

jinny

OMG! I lurved it. Very hot and kewl. I'm kinda glad Jefferson died... didn't like him. I would have flipped if Piza died... I lurv him. I think Montana and Piza are cute together . More on their relationship? I like Moria, he's kewl. Update soon!

um...interesting... ...i liked it though...sure took your own sweet time on doing that...question: why did Moria bond himself to Bradley...does he think- in the recesses of his mind- that he really loves Bradley...or is it just some fancy of his- because if i have this all right, that bonding was for life or something.

I'm excited about next time! and this chapter was really good as well! didn't mind Jeff biting the dust...he was going to become a traitor anyways lol so whateva... update soon!