This story is orgasmic. Every word, every sentence, every erotic-sounding word that escapes from Moria's mouth, I'm thrown into an endless abyss of kinky thoughts. Honestly, as delectibly long as this was - yes, I'm a size queen - it took me about two hours to read it. I need to stop having random fantasies in the middle of things. It could become dangerous.

So continue on - thanks for the translations, by the way. They make me happy in more ways than one.

Yum.

IF YOU KILL PIZA OR MONTANNA! ::grins and tackles:: OMG HEATHER! It was wonderful! I love the whole seme torture! The story line is so addicting! I LOVE IT! Just come out with the 3rd chapter a bit faster ok! ::huggles:

YAY! u continued! I liked that we got to see a bit of Moria's 'soft' side. i also loved the fact that he's basically a 'boy' and has the whole no respect problem. I think he handles it well. And that's the last character to die right. B/c Piza and Montana are so cute. They need to stay together. I'm lookin forward to learning more bout Moria and his people. Never thought I'd like a war story but this I luv! please keep going!

continue!continue!continue!continue!i beg you continue! it's wonderful i love Moria can't wiat to see what other things he's going to do to Bradley

Definitely continue. I love it.

Wow, intense. Can't wait to read more.

I love you! This is amazing. I love the fact that the uke is all over the seme. Wow. The characters are so amazing and well-planned it seems. That's one hell of a way to make him scream too.

*Drools* please do continue!

To lazy to sign in. All I have to say though is I've rubbed off you way to much with the ebilness. Lol. XD Very kewl, love Moria. Very yummy ebil sexy uke. I like Piza though He has uke written all over him to. XD Gotta keep Piza in, he's adorable. Poor guy. Anywho, great job. Very interesting.

I like the weirdness to this fic. I feel bad for Bradley...maybe he wont be tortured for much longer! update please!

you'v never had a story with real dom and sub characters...this is such a good idea thought! please continue writing it! you can't leave us haning liek this...as always, love [Kai] .

Okay...the sadist in me is very happy right now. I luv all your stories and this one is no exception. It is rather different from your other stories so I would like to see how this one works out. And, again, I must express the luv the sadist in me has for Moria. Man I need help. And please continue this one. No burning. Give us a chapter 2!

Entering the building he stopped seeing the two guards standing there. “Fág.”

Wow. This is some special language you have there, isn't it?

Anyway, I like it. Moria is the shits. I want a plushie.

I say keep it *nods nods* it was really good! i loved how it started off! please please update soon mk? *waves* g2g! (btw very interesting story idea. Impressive in fact lol) update soon!

omg so good wms