Ah - have I mentioned that I love you? If I haven't, now's the time for me to say it.

This story seems intriguing, and I like the plot you've set up. I'm writing a dark-ish rape story at the moment as well (I just started it a few days ago, too, what a coincidence) and obviously, this is a topic that quite intrigues me.

I like how you've created this other race of people; it makes it so much easier to bring a more broad spectrum of appearances in a story, or so I would imagine, since I've never really written fantasy.

Obviously, I think you should continue (though please don't abandon any other stories!). I'd say more, but my I'm in Vegas and my parents want to drag me...well, somewhere. Anyway, I look forward to more.

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! YES IT'S WORTH CONTINUING. MWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!SORRY, A BIT HYPER RIGHT NOW...GUESS WHO LAST KNOWN PEN NAME...GABRIELLE FALCON..

Umm...odd, but definitely worth continuing!

Wormy

I've told ya once...THIS IS SO COOL! AND SO WICKED! YOu do love your torture...::shakes head lightly and laughs:: AT least its not the uke thats being tormented this time!