|Reviews for This War of Ours|
| aninhas chapter 5 . 2/16/2010
you said the translations are listed on my space, well they must be well hidden from public view because I can't find them...
| raebyddeT chapter 16 . 1/26/2010
A standing ovation! Great story - Well written, witty and unique ! Love this story very much ! Do keep writing, love your works ! Kudos for being an awesome writer ...)
| Sanguineus chapter 16 . 1/23/2010
OMG I love this so much!
I have a hard time reconciling sadistic Moria and pregnant Moria too XD...he's just so...cute either way.
| CinderellaWithCombatBoots chapter 16 . 9/7/2009
Oh my god. I really love you...in a totally non-sexual way, haha :P That was amazing! I really loved it. I love Moria's character and how sweet and innocent he seems when really he's a little evil devil. They always make for the best sadists. But I love the story. I love...ok. I loved a lot. We'll make a list, shall we? Ok. So. Let's see...
Moria's character (his stubborness, his sadisticness, his desires)...
Moria's torture :P...
Bradley's payback to that torture...
The nipple piercings that signify the bonding...
Pis Chumhra...although not so crazy on the name...
I can't think of anything else. So. I loved all of those things. It's an amazing story with a solid plot and awesome characters.
| SabraChey chapter 7 . 9/5/2009
Will the Reclaimer and Torii have a stori?
It'd be awesome if they do.
| Kaida Nyghtwalker chapter 4 . 9/5/2009
You need to remember to put the translations of the language at the end of each chapter. It's annoying when you don't know what the hell they're saying.
| Tinted Windows chapter 16 . 8/7/2009
I am inlove with your work. Sorry, I have read all your CRDP books and love them! This book was very good I very much enjoyed the idea of male pregnancy, and also i loved Moria's 'Mean side' and his sadistic grin!
I sometimes got confused about the time slip. How sometimes there would be minuits diffenece and others there were months. So i felt wernt very well stated but that may just be me.
p.s. I know this isant your daughters poem comment page but i thought i would fit it all into one review. I very much liked your daughters poem, it was realy good. I know thats not very discripive but i know very little about poetry. I just enjoyed... not sure thats the word, reading it.
Thanks and please keep writting!
| Cinthia Annette chapter 16 . 7/9/2009
*Sqeal* AW! One of the best things I had read! I read it like three times! lol
| 12rct34 chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
I have read this story for a second time now and am surprised again about how much I like it considering that its subject matter is a little new to my tastes. You did an amazing job making me relate to the characters and empathize with them both in really interesting ways. Great job on that.
| Dent chapter 16 . 4/3/2009
Thanks for a lovely story, it came highly recommended on aarinfantasy and I'm glad I read it.
| DefineNightmare chapter 16 . 2/26/2009
I really love this story, and I hope I can read the other two stories with Torii and Lasa.
xD FAVS -goes into la la land-
| NarutoVixin chapter 16 . 1/25/2009
your good at ending on cliff hangers lol makes me keep reading you
| JeanNicole chapter 1 . 1/19/2009
Stupid me, I read Tainted Angel first, not realizing it was part of a set. But I loved it SO much, I'm really looking forward to reading this one, too!
| Orio K chapter 16 . 11/23/2008
I totally loved reading this story. I'm failing chemistry because I couldn't stop reading it! (JK)
It's really cool how you throw the typical top/bottom steriotypes for a loop, what with Bradly getting tied up all the time. I love Moria's sadistic streak, lol.
I'm excited to read "Tainted Angel." poor Lasa.
| QueenCasey chapter 1 . 9/12/2008
Please get this story up again soon! No rush. I've already read it. I love it by the way. It's so good.