Reviews for This War of Ours |
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Lady Psychic chapter 16 . 5/1/2006 Wow! This was an awesome story. I know this because I read the entire thing in one session. I usually don't do this for long stories, but I just couldn't stop reading. |
Storm December chapter 1 . 4/19/2006 Adding! TTFN! ;) |
S.Tori chapter 7 . 3/27/2006 Dude, the reclaimer reminds me so much of Duo. I mean, slightly psychotic, underaged, violet-eyed assassin? Last name, Maxwell? WICKED! **grins** |
Prisoner-11 chapter 16 . 2/15/2006 Brava! Brava! I loved it! (I almost missed classes this morning because of it...I was late anyways...) It was perfect! But what happend to Torii? |
Kitsune Luver chapter 16 . 2/10/2006 This was a very good story. The only complaint that I have is that it got kinda choppy in the last few chapters. And it ended rather abruptly. I was expecting more. Hardly any of the problems were resolved. I feel kinda unfulfilled. I want more. Well anyway, I definitely enjoyed reading it and I thank you for writing such a wonderful story. I can definitely use a little joy right now, so thanks. |
Jade Usako chapter 1 . 12/20/2005 I have read the whole story and loved every word of it. Hope you keep up with all the great storys! and please finsih up "Tainted Angel". Can't wait to see how that one ends. |
ToEatTheseApplesFromYourEyes chapter 16 . 11/22/2005 I've been reading this story on adultfanfiction so I was only at the part where they were just coming back to earth when I ending up seeing this story on here so I had to read it all. I tried to make myself wait so I could draw it out, but I couldn't stop myself from going on. Moria is so weird and funny..I really like him! |
Nickel Xenon chapter 16 . 11/6/2005 Very nice. I loved all the characters. |
afk chapter 16 . 9/26/2005 luved it! specially teh begining hahahaha XD i'm sick lol i'm gonna check what oteh rstorie syou have ~ |
thousand little pieces chapter 16 . 9/14/2005 wow.. that was really great! I honestly loved reading this so much! I think you did a great job with the characters, and especially with Moria, I really liked the way we got to see all the different sides to him. And his language - it's so lovely! |
yuri sasou chapter 1 . 9/7/2005 Ohmigosh! You finished it! It's a really great ending,i will always remember this story :D But what happened to torii,i wanna read bout him,maybe throw in Moria as a guest character( I LOVE Moria),that'd be so COOL. YAY! |
Nate T chapter 16 . 9/6/2005 “I am prince Moria, of Garnet. That boy is from my planet.” “I see,” The doctor said. HAHAHA. Sorry. I read this right before calculus, and suddenly, that seems hillarious. Good ending, good ending. A little sudden, but good. |
SatisfyAnEmptyInside chapter 16 . 9/2/2005 Ha, I kind of spazzed out when I saw the complete thing the summary…only because I wasn’t expecting it, but I do think it was a really, really nice place to end. I wasn’t expecting any kind of romantic declaration at all, because, like you said, I just couldn’t see in happening with there two without it being OOC. I love how Moria is overprotective (as much as he can be, anyway) about the baby, mainly about Bradley being with him. It works well, since Moria isn’t at all trusting to begin with. [Moria shrugged not sure what to tell him. “I am not sure when he is sending me back.”] I find it really sad that after what they had gone through (with him staying with Bradley and such), he still thought that Bradley was going to send him back. Understandable, of course, but grr at Moria for thinking so anyway. Ah, kind of painful to read their fight (in a good way, of course.) More painful to read with Moria obviously thinking that Bradley was taking Blair and kicking his ass…you know, away. Sex scene (heh)…I always like when the roles are sort of switched. And it was rough, but semi-sweet in a way. You did it very nicely. (and that is all from me about the sex because I will make a complete ass out of myself if I say more.) *just glares at Hogorth* How glad I am that he got stabbed. I’m sure that makes me a bit evil, but he was a bastard. Hmm, I assume Lása is going to be okay (and I hope he is.) Very lovely way to end this story…sweet, but not in an average sense, and it just…fit. I’ll be excited to read anything more with these characters. *love* |
Deadly Beautiful chapter 16 . 9/2/2005 Aww! I liked it overall. Read this in a few days _ Keep up the other writings : ) |
Aizu Saphire chapter 16 . 9/1/2005 EMO ANGST! XD *tackles* |