Reviews for I Need You
Infection chapter 1 . 3/31/2005
it's amazing how you used a flower-usually a sign of life-for such a dark desire, the contrast worked extremely well.~infection~
florbixblaster chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
i especially liked the last verse. very true. this one came from the heart.
born-again chapter 1 . 1/12/2005
I love the second stanza, its so sad but very beautiful at the same time.
Poetrybay chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
thaat was really good you have a talent take from someone who knows it took me a very long time to find that writing is my life and writing is gooing to get you somewhere. have you ever thought about publishing your work?
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
That is rought but the emotion is real and untainted. I can relate, I miss my ex so! Keep writing.

~*~Amber
ApplesCM chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Too me a poem can't be bad if its written with you feelings. I love the lat stanza. Tis great.
Teperehmi chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
That was really good! I've felt that before.
catseyeview chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
sad but beautifully written
Dancinggal5389 chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Honest and raw and touching
Cry Tears of Darkness chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
this is good, i mean, its good. relatable as well.
AntiPleasure chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Girl, you're writing so fluently but I hope that it helps you get over it. If not, shall I beat him for you? )

Jenna xoxo
karmakaze chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
I can relate:-) I like.
ForgottenRiver chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Aww...probably feels yucky to have to depend on someone like that, doesn't it...? And I know its tough to be strong about this kind of thing. But from my limited experience with this sort of thing, writing really helps you vent your feelings.

I'm really loving the metaphors in this poem. They really help bring your work to life.

Thank you for your generous reviews. :)

~FR
poetic abortion chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
Brillant ! *o*

~ Noelle ~
logical-unreason chapter 1 . 1/2/2005
You suck.
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