Reviews for In The Dark With You
The Synoptic chapter 9 . 3/21/2012
I usually don't review until I read the last chapter, but this is already extraordinary and I felt a burning need to tell you so. Elizabeth is very believable, confused and naive but bright and clearheaded. Damien likewise is utterly believable, a man with a childlike understanding of his predicament but a determination to be a gentleman and to do things properly. The supporting cast is perfectly crafted, with complete personalities. The whole story is written in a friendly, clear way that compliments the characters and draws the reader in.

I can't wait to read the rest!
Mori Verne chapter 21 . 4/30/2011
Brilliant plot...its just that this story makes me really...pessimistic I suppose because I feel like this aint going to be a happily ever after story...is that true?
sarabeth120 chapter 1 . 3/22/2011
Hi there! I'm a member of the FP Watchers on livejournal which is a group that was created to find and stop the plagiarism that has swept over Fictionpress in the past few years. I'm reviewing to let you know that someone on quizilla has posted the prologue and first chapter of your story (link: quizilla . teennick user/Synthetic0x/profile/). I don't know if you're even active on here anymore, but you still have a right to know that someone else is claiming your story as theirs.
xkcbby chapter 34 . 12/20/2010
I enjoyed reading this. I had higher hopes for this story than it made out to be. Don't get me wrong; it was well written and unique. I just imagined a darker, more complex plot. I'm glad everything turned out well. I do love the characters, especially Beth and Damien, and the way they met. You built the tension between them rather nicely. I haven't read the 'original' of this story, so I have no comparison. Well written.

Cheers.
Xanthe P chapter 34 . 12/16/2010
EXCELLENT STORY! I loved every bit of it. :)
akaCHEEKS chapter 34 . 11/8/2010
I love this chapter. Just because the thing written in these journals are so different compared to the sad and lonely things that were different from the first journals Damien wrote. Good story.
akaCHEEKS chapter 30 . 11/8/2010
Hahahaha! She is much more scandalous than her sister. I love how spontaneous she is. It's so cute!
akaCHEEKS chapter 9 . 11/7/2010
Glad I found this story. It's really good so far I love the plot. But it's late now and I'm going to sleep. No worries though. I'll continue this tomorrow.
choc me chapter 34 . 9/10/2010
Amazing story and characters...So much depth ..I couldn't help but cry at the end..
Alornia chapter 34 . 5/13/2010
This was so good;I loved that even though Damian and Beth were the main characters, the others had great parts in the story as well. So many times, secondary characters are introduced and a romance blooms, but because they are secondary, detail is always minimal. And not only that, but the character development was wonderful; I really felt like I saw them, not just read about them.
Aradia Cloud chapter 34 . 5/23/2009
Oh my God... I love this story and loved how it ended. Hell; I'm crying. I'm such a sap.
Obsession Changes Things chapter 34 . 5/17/2009
OMG! THIS STORY WAS SO GOOD! I ACCIDENTALLY STUMBLED UPON IT ABD WAS SO GLAD THAT I DID! I HAVE TO SAY THAT STORY LINE, THE CHARACTERS, AND ESPECIALLY THE WONDERFULL ENDING WERE SO WELL DEVELOPED AND THOUGHT THROUGH THAT I AM AMAIZED THAT YOU DON'T HAVE MORE REVIEWS. YOU SHOULD CONSIDDER WRITTING ANOTHER SOTRY, FOR I WOULD GLADLY READ THAT ONE AS WELL. I LOVED THE WHOLE THING FROM THE START TO THE VERY UNIQUE ENDING WITH THE JUORNALS, VERY INTERESTING AND WELL THOUGHT TROUGH. WELL DONE! I MUST SAY ONE OF THE BEST SORIES THAT I HAVE EVER READ, ON THIS SIGHT AND OUT OF THE MANY ACTUAL PUCLISHED BOOKS THAT I HAVE READ IT WAS SIMPLEY AMAZING!

~OBSESSION
StarEyed14 chapter 34 . 1/8/2009
this story was amazing!
Nikki chapter 34 . 10/16/2008
gorgeous story. i laughed, i cried, i covered my mouth in shock and outrage, and i could no more tear myself away from this blasted computer than could the moon tear itself from the earth and go have a fling with mars. i'm unsure if this little paragraph of drivel will reach you, but it matters not because having written a tale of such awesomeness, what more appreciation could be needed than to simply bask in it's glow?
dawn's unforgiving darkness chapter 1 . 10/1/2008
just making a note to read
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