I love this story so far...I wonder about the ending though lol I want happy...haha I lvoe the characters...ethan though annoys me...so rude...hm good write again though as always.

Bloody hell! You can't just stop like that! Wonderful WONDERFUL writing and characters! :) UPDATE

Another awsome chapter. I loved how you ended it...so dramatic and honest. Very good write again. And if I find other sites where you can post your work I would be happy to let you know. I love reading as well so if you ever want to send a copy via e-mail I would love to read it.

Wow...He's already falling in love with her. I feel so sad for Damien...He's starting to become one of my favorite characters. I was wondering, how many chapters are you planning to write? Update more! -

I like how you go into POV's with both Elizabeth and Damien, kind of ables you to get into their heads a little, which is good. The ending to this chapter is particularly sad :( I had never really thought about Elizabeth leaving him, which is quite a possibility. Hopefully not though.. who knows what Damien would do then.

I guess I'll have to wait on that then ;) Keep up the good work!

What exactly is the role of Ethan? I've gathered that Tira etc are house-sitters of some sort, and put Damien under house arrest while they get his money? Is that right?

This story is written very well. I love the characters. I can see the way the characters will devolop more. Update soon!

Awesome story. Beautifully composed and written. Keep up the great work, I'm counting on an update soon.

Hi. I read about half this chapter and then I didn't have time for more. But it seemed like a really really great story, and I'm going to read the rest as soon as I possibly can. Yay.

~ Bai.

Another wonderful chapter. I can't wait to see what Tara's response to her is and the evan. Good write though as always.

My my, are you sure you shouldn't become a stand-up comedian? It's so hilarious in parts, which makes it so much more awesome.

Just lovin' these last couple chapters. Elizabeth and Damien meeting was better than I had expected.. Damien's immediate possessiveness towards her was sweet, and Elizabeth reaching out to him was also :)

I can't wait to read more.

Reminds me a bit of beauty and the Beast *smile*...vaugly that is. Great chapter. I am glad the two main chars finally met. O love at first sight...or touch that is. Sweet.

I really love your story. There's not really that much more I can think of except please continue and update soon.

O ha you should just keep posting because I am really into your story. I am glad crosbie died...the idiot. *Smile* good writing as always...keep it up.