Reviews for I Lie
Fairy Tale Lies chapter 1 . 1/21/2005
Very well done. I know how you feel. I've been lying quite a lot these days to. But anyhoot this was a very good poem. Fictionpress format thingy is really annoying but you make up for it with a brand spanking poem! Good job.
KwazyKandyPie chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
oh wow! I can imangine this as a song! great poem! has the beat and rhyming! excellent!

i especially liked the lines:"I lie, I lie to stay alive

I lie to stay the same

I know you're not to blame

But I will never change"

and"Lieing hurts us less

Maybe its for the best

Lieing hurts us less

Maybe its for the best"

fantastic! Must fav. _
queenvixta chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Interesting - not saying I don't agree! Some of the rhyming is really good but there are a few rhymes that maybe arent so fitting - anyway only my opinion. But yeah a cool song!