Update?

where the hell are you?! it has been over 5 years chica! get your ass back on here and finish this story! you can NOT leave it off here! finish or i will try my damn hardest to find you and force you to finish writing. i soooo don't like being led to believe that it'll continue and hasn't even been updated in years. Get. On. Soon. And. Update. Or. Else.

I KNEW IT WAS SOMETHING DEALING WITH MYTHOLOGY! _ i just thought it was, like,
werewolf-ish stuff. definitely NOT expecting it to be Atlantis! LOVE IT! great going! loving the story btw! your amazing at this!

I hope you will continue one day

LOL! Your note about choosing the most outlandish path a story can take made me laugh. Too many times we writers are forced to make our stories pass the conservative "could it be real life" test, when a lot of real life stories are incredible/ludicrous. And quite frankly, if I wanted to know more about real life, I'd live my life/talk to my friends and colleagues/volunteer at the nearest shelter, thank you. I read fiction on this site because i'm looking for something imaginative.

But back to reviewing your story, I liked the hints you put forward about Trey's mother before we learnt about the Gods etc. I do wonder though, if Chris knew/ how he feels about the fact that his wife is alive and is a Goddess. I also understand that Trey's Gran (presumably another Goddess) has been around and it would be nice if you explained why mother had to leave but gran could continue to hang out in their life. Oh, and you mentioned that Drake's father was on deathbed, yet, until the poisoning, the dude seemed fine. Maybe you need to revisit the issue and explain more about deathbed issue? Or make it into prediction of possible death. And, no one seemed very concerned that King was on deathbed until the poisoning and you say the king is young and had hundreds of years left (previous chapter). A bit of contradiction there?

Anyhoo, overall, I like the story. I just think you need to strengthen characterisation a bit. Explain people's motivations more, watch out for contraditions/ changes in character ( my usual problem is naming a character X in one chapter and Z several chapters down the line:-)

Good luck.

is this story ever gona get finished

ERM IM NOT SURE IF IT WAS MENTIONED BUT WHAT EXACTLY IS DRAKE'S COMPANION

oh WOW!LOL WHAT ELSE CAN I SAY

well u've captivated my interest so for the nxt chapter

this story is really interesting...it has a great plot, keep working at it!

dont kill of trey's dad...that would majorly suck (

from the first to this chapter, i have been amazed by the book, keep going girl!

I was wondering when you're going to update?

update! will be love _

ow tyler is so cutie~ love the couple

Thank you

Whats next, whats next.

Of course we still want to read. I've been waiting for this chapter forever!