Reviews for foolproof
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
Aw, how sad. Since that happened, I've read a lot of poems on it, but yours has been the saddest yet (which is good..okay, what happened wasn't good, but...never mind. You know me!).

Masochist Maxwell
tabiboi chapter 1 . 1/27/2005
That's so sad :( But today I heard that the US has given 1.2 billion dollars to help the tsunami victims-and the Red Cross says that's enough.
Lil Firecracker chapter 1 . 1/18/2005
whoa... a truly powerful poem, sad, but powerful...
RomanceDeceptionist chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Hey there, thanks for reviewing my poem.

Wow... this is really awesome and shocking at the same time. This poem reminds me of the movie, The Good Son. A lady has to let go of one of her sons to free the other, and she lets the older one go. That is so sad, when someone is faced with a a decision like that. Good thing he made it back home. Awesome poem. Keep Writing!

RomanceDeceptionist
AllyCred chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
omg... that was soo sad but beautiful, i love the emotion and the truth, as we know it happened it kinda makes it hit home even further, you know. but you put this down well. i loved it. lots of love AllyCred