Reviews for Rotting Head and Esophogus
MySweetestSorrow chapter 1 . 1/25/2005
ok wow if i get any of this its not just emo its kinda to real... ok maybe im Paranoid but this isnt just a poem, even tho it is very good
SaveMeToo chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Emo, yes, yes, yes, I like it (but then I would being such an emo fan) Weird rythem, but it's pretty good. I like the EMOtion haha

Mango Motercycle chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
Hey mal this is scaryWe need to talkLove always and Forever-Your Soulmate

p.s. good job, though, on the poem
Fancy chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
hmm... seems to have eaten my half-written review, so I'll try again. Sorry if this shows up twice.

I really liked the meter of the second half of this poem, but the first half didn't really seem to have any particular flow.

I'm a bit curious about your decision to classify this as "emo." It seems rather arbitrary, and maybe even unnecessary, since a lot of poetry tends to be about emotions.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
::sigh:: very well done and powerful.. fp needs a bunch of new categories (emo, death, heartbreak etc.)