Reviews for Aryk's Tale
Mafortion chapter 2 . 3/3/2005
Same as chapter one.
Mafortion chapter 1 . 3/3/2005
Very good! The only thing that I have to say is that I might have changed some of the vocab.
Until This Echo chapter 2 . 1/5/2005
I like the characters a lot, especially Althaeas. They've got potential. (well, Aryk, but you know what I mean)

A couple suggestions, though. Try to describe a tad bit more, not overly so, but a little. Whenever they pause, (perhaps when Aryk and company are waiting?) do a little thinking, character development.

I'm gonna be looking for more additions. _; Don't let me 's a great story. I'll be adding this to my favorites.
Ceridwen Rohbyn chapter 1 . 1/3/2005
I love the story! But just a little advice. I saw that you would often describe an action like "They Followed their master silently, but where stopped again." Try to describe a bit of what these characters are thinking and a little bit more on their surroundings. All in all though, it was great!