|Reviews for crash|
| young and the reckless chapter 1 . 3/28/2009
"our love is a stillborn child" ...fantastic.
| Juni chapter 1 . 4/21/2008
Really beautiful. I'm a bit of a rambler myself, so I love succinct, powerfully written poetry like this. You say so much in so few words.
| Sapphire Spectrum chapter 1 . 11/21/2005
that was truly incredible and beautiful. It had so much meaning behind it. You are a brilliant poet!
| the naked civil servant chapter 1 . 8/6/2005
it's mindblowing, and reminds me of the pictures of second hand plain wood bloodstained coffins and thin, dying amputees, that make me feel so sick. so fucking powerful
| Kellza chapter 1 . 8/4/2005
This makes me think of disaster victims. It brought to mind, for me, an image I'd seen in a photo after the poetry is always beautiful. This one, while short, managed to capture a peak of emotion that would be hard to grasp in any other form besides poetry.
| hahahahahaha chapter 1 . 6/7/2005
oh wow. short and so sharp. powerful words, especially "our love is a stillborn child". simply poignant.
| Aneliz Rei chapter 1 . 6/5/2005
You speak things and pictures, not words. I see yellow hospital lights and a linoleum floor; still, crisply linened, sad sheets; aluminum bars just holding this dead weight off the floor. Regardless of the fact that these may not have been the intended images, please take the compliment as intended.
I shall read on; I wish I had discovered your works earlier.
| Lux's Confusion chapter 1 . 6/2/2005
the stillness is the light, the lack is the beauty, the death is the all embracing peace, but alive with meaning, and energy and memory. hmm, it's a thinker no doubt.
| Moonjava chapter 1 . 5/22/2005
I like this one to.
| akaSummer chapter 1 . 5/18/2005
Oh, you're good.
| Hippy Maniac chapter 1 . 3/30/2005
Oh and by the way I am British and therefore I spell 'judgement' like that rather than 'judgment' so don't correct my spelling.
| Nobody-n-Particular chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
| Hippy Maniac chapter 1 . 3/29/2005
The use of no punctuation aren't doing anything for you hun, other than that great poem! I probably shouldn't be quite so happy about it as it is one of those depressing ones but oh well, I liked it!
| Opium Hex chapter 1 . 3/23/2005
You've reviewed my work as Ruby Woo...I won't be using that name any more, so check out OpiumHex...lots of new stuff :D
| not sure yet chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
strong last line, muchly excellently enjoyed this