Wonderful start! I do hope you come back to this!

I'll be a rebel and review the dead chapter

it is 2016 ;-;

I am devastated that there aren't any more chapters ):

So far as I can see, this story is pretty awesome. I can't wait to see some updates.

My heart sank when I realized you haven't updated for years. Why? :(
And such a beautiful story. So damn well written
Well, maybe a miracle will happen and you will update someday :D

Wah, you need to get on top of your rewriting! I really like this story and you stopped! It's been years since you last updated! I really hope you reconnect and continue this story since it's so promising. I'll be waiting for you to update... especially since you left the last chapter off with such promise and anticipation.

Umm, cue the face biting. I just finished reading the last few chapters and I literally wanted to start crying because you ended it there. Seriously, I've never been so captivated by a story and I'm just so pissed off right now because you didn't finish it! OMG UGHHHH. Girl. Seriously. Seriously. Is there any where else that I can read the whole entire thing?

I think its really selfish of you to have left this as it is for so many years after making a promise to complete it. Selfish because you have a gift that you chose to show off and then when you hooked fairytale believing readers, such as myself, you just left us hanging with a promise for more.

So ... Are you ever going to finish this?

This is a beautiful story. I was so excited about it by the end of the first paragraph of chapter one and I planned to spend all night reading it...and I just realized that you haven't updated it in...5 years? I might just cry. Understand- if you published this as a novel, I would buy it and love it forever.

I'm going to go be depressed now.

Good god what have you done. So here I am just looking through all these dead chapters. And it says dont review these dead chapters. Well too bad I just started reading this and now I have come to realize I'll never get past chapter six. So ill never see the originals ever. It's obviously been four years. I've come to the conclusion you've given up entirely. Its a real shame someone would do something like this. It's almost like a smack to the face being denyed chapters you had already written. I mean really why take them down and put the silly notification of promises of a rewrite. Well I enjoyed the first few chapters I had the luxury to read

Not cool, man. Not cool.
Let the face biting commence. A good three years worth of face biting.

Please bite your own face because you've far surrpassed a week and have not updated a wonderfully breathtaking story in too many a year.

What happened? I saw you planned to rewrite the next chapters, but you never did. Will you ever finish posting it here? I loved the story...