Reviews for What the world is made of
Athena's girl chapter 1 . 8/15/2005
Lol.I don't know why I find this poem so entertaining, but I do. It's wonderfully done, and I really, really! like it.
SweetWithUncertainty chapter 1 . 5/13/2005
great poem, really makes you think about what lies underneath, so to speak.


Thx for reviewing my poem ;)
Gracie Lou Freebush chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Again good spacing. Great imagery and depression, yet realistic. Fanciful, but true. Great poetry!
writerbud85 chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
I like this poem. Nice imagery. I especially like " the blue and green earth now a black color, with pain" and "forests falling to metal blades..." Good work.