|Reviews for And every one said that same thing|
| Disturbing Loner chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
its very good... a bit depressing perhaps (but something about this subject SHOULD be). Its also well written... clear/easy to understand but still has a good rythm
only thing I can think of is that (i think) every one should be everyone (1 word), could be wrong though...
| T Jenkins chapter 1 . 1/4/2005
Very nice. Sad. Reminds me of a friend, and I in fact wrote a short story about her. Ariana's Story-you can read it, if you want. Well-written. Good word choice. Arouses strong emotions, but not necesarily happy ones. Nicely done.