|Reviews for Jinn and Houri Verses Seraphim and Cherubim|
| Caleb Down chapter 1 . 2/28/2005
I think that you have a very interesting subject matter here, but you definantly need to expand much more on this. The last two paragraphs, especially, can be blown up tremendously. You should definantly go more in depth into this. Try doing some more comparison, contrast, analysis, and overall you need to go more in depth. Try tracing the histories of these four creatures, the meanings and the culture from which they grew. You need to start thinking about what these spirits meant to their cultures, not just the definitions of what they are. I'd like to see deeper plunges, more expansive analysis, and something other than just a scraping-the-crust comparison.
| VDraconis chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
I found this lacking. There's so much more information out there that could be discussed, at least for the Judeo-Christian angels.