Reviews for Let Me Go!
Camman chapter 1 . 2/3/2005
It seems that some of the puctuation, most of it, in fact, shouls be more exlimation marks and less question marks... But that's my take. Its a good poem, very angsty.
Silentwriter9 chapter 1 . 1/22/2005
I like this poem. It is short but full of simple details. I like the last line with both of the lines questions.

*Silent Writer*

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lengg chapter 1 . 1/19/2005
nice poem. I can imagine how you want to go home, missing it really much yet someone forbod to let you go.
pandora505 chapter 1 . 1/16/2005
Interesting. I like the way "Let me go" starts as a statement and ends as a question.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/8/2005
I am anymore because I’ tried for so long to be strong, to hold on.. I've or no apostrophe

I like it but im nto sure bout the format.. the third line seems stopped uin an awkward possition... but I do loce hte use of question marks
katmonkey chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Hey, amazing poem. I like how it ends with questions.