|Reviews for Concrete Angel|
| EPuppy chapter 16 . 10/11/2013
Ahhh! Awww ohwww hmmm babyyy aww little thingsss lov them aw
| EPuppy chapter 15 . 10/11/2013
I feel somethun from billyy
| EPuppy chapter 14 . 10/11/2013
Aw soooo cute! Hate Mandyy! Argh.
| EPuppy chapter 13 . 10/11/2013
I support you for no takin the beer dear! :)
| EPuppy chapter 12 . 10/11/2013
Epic song! (:
| EPuppy chapter 11 . 10/11/2013
Favorite chapter by far! Idk if im depressed but your chapters are makin me cryyy:'( and i lov that cuz u made me feel his emotions and i get him.
| EPuppy chapter 9 . 10/11/2013
Loved the song . always make me cry:( loved the chapter and all the before somehow i cant review! But this fic is amazing awesome! I looov it :3
| A.Collins chapter 32 . 7/18/2013
The story was very rushed, and the time lapses should have been more clear. Everything happened so quickly, especially the romances. Chester was extremely hot and cold - one day loving Mike, the end acting like he wants nothing to do with him. Though I love the angst, and I would've loved to see it drawn out a little more before Mike finally took Chester back. Plus Chester is kind of a douche by how many times he's played with Mikes feelings.
Those are just the few I can think of off the top of my head immediately finishing this story.
I absolutely love the story, it just could've been executed better. This is why I'm glad it was written in 04/05, and your writing had probably gotten way better, if you're still writing that is.
I wonder how much better it would be if it was re-written.
This review will probably end up not being seen because of how late I'm reading this, haha!
| Tiitu chapter 8 . 9/12/2012
I love your story this far, I love characters like Mike, always have :) Thank you so much for writing this story
| dissapointed spelled wrong chapter 32 . 6/24/2012
i dont like this. chester hurt him multiple times. needed chris action. ending to cheery &cheesy.
| taintedbutterfly88 chapter 19 . 3/1/2012
I love your music choices I love every single song! And poem!
| Guest chapter 3 . 2/29/2012
I can really relate to Mike I've thought and done so much like him other then his talent that is.
| Raaawr Ima Dinosaur chapter 32 . 9/7/2011
This was such an amazing story and I loved it! Although I wasn't too happy that Mike and Chester got back together in the end. I don't know why but I really wanted Mike to end up with Chris...I'm so weird xD But I honestly did like this and think you did a great job :)
| roamingsheep1 chapter 32 . 6/28/2011
In my opinion your story startet out very good, but kept dieing down with every chapter. Also the lyrics or poems in every chapter became very annoying.
I don't like the end either. Running away is just a weak solution for all his problems. I'd like the story better if you would have turned mike (or chester) into someone strong in the end by calling the authorities.
| Lunatrix chapter 1 . 3/10/2011
Try developing your sentences more. They were really choppy, and I felt like I was reading something written by a 14 year old. Which is possible I suppose. I honestly don't want to sound mean, I just think that that is something you should work on.
Of course, this story has been up for a while, so possibly you already have.