Reviews for ignorant
Russian lover chapter 1 . 5/7/2005
Wow...beautiful. You can really feel her pain, although I don't really get waht's going on. It's still beautiful though. And I love that last line. Really hits you hard how all he cares about is his stained carpet. Hope someone at the cleaners asks about the blood and he gets arrested or something.
Morbid Maxwell chapter 1 . 2/2/2005
...what a prick. At least do something with the body! Jeez, why didn't they just rent a steam cleaner? It would've came out...eventually.

(Great job, I love your works!)

Masochist Maxwell
Steel Winged Angel chapter 1 . 1/10/2005
Wow...this is extremily powerful. The black stare, the begging for help. The last line hits you like a bullet to the hard. Superb job. Keep it up!Hawke
AllyCred chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
i guess in this world people are nothing but ignorant to other peoples pain, even if they could save there life, but i love this coz you really get the feelings down well and the emotions protrayed are very well done, loved it can relate in a strange way. lots of love AllyCred
fallenwithbrokenwings chapter 1 . 1/6/2005
undiscribably magnificent keep writing!
RomanceDeceptionist chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Hey there again...

Again, this is a great poem. Always give excellent ideas and thoughts in your poems. This portrays the effect of how there are cold hearted people in the world that would leave people for dead.
Alice Morgan chapter 1 . 1/5/2005
Wow...you can really feel the anger of being ignored when you need help.