Reviews for Suitcases
simpleplan13 chapter 4 . 6/20/2006
i like the metaphors.. theyre beautiful.. well done
simpleplan13 chapter 3 . 6/10/2006
i like this.. beautifully written and very powerful
simpleplan13 chapter 2 . 6/9/2006
i love the description of the dancing.. tis beautiful and the last line is great.. kinda sad bc it seems to imply that when shes not dancing she is lonely
empathic life chapter 1 . 2/14/2006
Very expressive. Full of emotion. I like the title. Not much else to say. Beautiful poem.

E. L.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 1/7/2005
very true and sad.. well written.. I really like the ending